there is a mirror (there's a monster)
in the corner (in my closet)
shows me my flaws (with big meaty jaws)
pristeen and all (the teeth are shining)
happy. (in the dark)
[these scars i aquired]
[long before i'd seen your eyes]
[have almost expired]
[in mine]
Friday, May 12, 2006
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2 comments:
awwwww, love this. and like the double poem happening in it. je approve!
actually got through writing the two parts as seperate pieces before i realised the train of thought was so coherent as to fit them together into one, big, long, run-on sentence.
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