Wednesday, May 10, 2006

begging lines.

four hours later
came out smiling
a champion of grinning
and wondered
if he'd won
why his heart was still racing.

6 comments:

honest + popular said...

aren't you cute and clever?

honest + popular said...

ok, NOW i'm leaving. seriously. later on.

ALIKOY said...

yeah.. why?

nice. i like this one =p

Monsta said...

oh? sounds like you just sat for an exam which you did well... haha

Pat Paulk said...

Excellent poem Lukas!! Does leave one wondering...

Lukas Abrhm said...

i'm very glad it left everyone feeling as such.
i think that was the point.
maybe not.