if i place the sun just right to accentuate the axis and cast your long shadow gracefully on it to make your limbs longer so that they might traverse this earth and make the space between non-existant.
wow. i like this a lot. it reminds me of how it feels to be away from someone, and how even though your far away you can feel their presence and it makes you happy... even as you ache for them. bittersweet.
and i like the line "may your sunsets find you easily" on The Belfry site.
by the way, thanks for commenting on my blog. i think you might be the only person who reads it, and i really do appreciate the feedback. i'm up for constructive criticism too if you have some. its good. now that i'm home again, i'll be posting more.
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wow. i like this a lot. it reminds me of how it feels to be away from someone, and how even though your far away you can feel their presence and it makes you happy... even as you ache for them. bittersweet.
and i like the line "may your sunsets find you easily" on The Belfry site.
by the way, thanks for commenting on my blog. i think you might be the only person who reads it, and i really do appreciate the feedback. i'm up for constructive criticism too if you have some. its good.
now that i'm home again, i'll be posting more.
never did tell you how much i love this one. i start to think and the earth slides off its axis...
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